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Old 5th August 2017, 06:59 PM
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Well McNutty, hats off to you again. Here are a couple I came up with. Apologies if they don't fit the meter.

Mr Rik once had a cat
and his wife is such a fright.
Do not forget Charlie Wayne
who up and disappeared one night.

Dangerosa has a son
who is a druggie, shiftless and lazy
while Leo Bloom, idiot,
has a grip on reality that is quite hazy.
Goddamn it did you even listen to the song?!? Fifteen syllables per couplet, motherfucker. Either 8/7 or 7/8. You got it on the Charlie one but the others are a disaster.

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